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@missfaeriekaiti Yup! That’s what I wondered! I…think I could manage in a month. I don’t suppose you can send a PDF can you? Or that and a Google Doc? I can read PDFs on my kindle and leave comments on Google Docs if necessary. I’ve never tried a txt file on a kindle, but I suppose I could. What kind of feedback are you looking for specifically? Just reaction and general thoughts or something specific I can look out for and answer? Uh, yas! This is awesome! (I’m reading like a bazillion books right now, but it’s all good XD I got this!)

Aw, thanks. You know, I’ve never read anyone else’s Eden. That’s an intriguing concept. The one in my story is just…I guess like…well, it’s physically closest to the stars, on the top of a high mountain, so for me (and it’s really not even truly a part of the story so much as a setting in passing as the MCs find the Man Who Walks With Stars who leads them to the Prince of Stars). It’s super early in the planning stages, but it’s basically a garden and waterfall on the mountaintop. I never really thought about making it perfect, like Eden, so much as a place where God dwells with men (or in this case, one man and the fairies and elf who come to find him.)