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Coralie replied to the topic The Ugly Stepsister in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
@rolena-hatfield oh my gosh! Thank you so much! You’re comments were extremely helpful!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 I’ve been so exited about this story! There’s several more scenes written already, but I’ve kind of got to figure some stuff out before I add any more words. Biggest issue so far is pov :/ I don’t know what to do!
@pookiemonster Thank you so much for reading! I’m so glad you liked her! She’s quite grown on me, and her personality is developing rather strongly, I think! She’s much more opinionated and stubborn than I initially gave her credit for! I thought the glassblowing idea would be fun. I hadn’t thought about how such an outlandish idea would suit a child though! Great thing to notice!
Well, each of their names were very specifically chosen. “Lenora” actually means “shinning light.” 🙂 I do hope to make a way for that to be threaded into the story, but don’t have any specific plans at the moment. If you have any ideas, let me know! It kind of came from the idea of cinders–>fire–>light.












