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Thank you! Yeah well, the man in the police car wasn’t really important lol. I had originally planned on him being more but….. you know, how stories change! haha

Okay yeah, the POV thing makes sense! Though I change from character to character in my later chapters bc there are more characters lol! I think a normal chapter changes POV 4 times! Bc the characters aren’t all in the same spot and time so…yeah.

Yeah, and the punctuation was a good spot too! Makes sense! I’ll definitely change that and look for it as I go! haha

You’ve really improved since the last chapter, and I really like the story. Keep writing. I’ll pray for you.

Thank you! I really think you and this whole site has really helped me!!

I should thank @purpleturtle for telling me about this site too!

-Beth