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Bronte Clarke / Tara Belle replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Thank you 🙂
If it helped inspire you for any writing, that’s awesome!
Thank you! (for both the challenge & the feedback~)
I will definitely add to this story, based on your response (more of Jade’s thoughts & struggles/fears, a little more on the school setting, character styles (could be interesting to see a different ‘sight’ of some of the characters to main story MC),
I’m planning to add this as a side story / back story in my main story, so the undercurrents not listed here will be known by the readers of the main story, but not yet to the characters as they interact with each other for the first time. (So I should put more on her first impressions of Charlise & Willem too.) Yeah, Jade was walking into something (not necessarily to hurt her but she ends up making friends out of it without realising, so I’m not sure how much of this I should show.)
Eh heh ~ the Gangly Boy ~ He does have a name, but I purposely left it out here. He will pop up again in the main story later (about Adventure 6 in the current plan, which is halfway through the school year). I am glad you liked him.











Bronte,
I so enjoy watching your ideas flower into being. It is like a blooming field of wildflowers. Keep it up, girl! Your weaving an amazing tapestry.