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@lonathecat

I liked it. Especially the one about Life and Death. I think you have something profound with picturing Death as peace, and not as something evil.

On the first story, there was once sentence that bugged me.

I would either cut the “called over her shoulder,” or put it after what she actually said. It might go a little smoother that way.

Hope that helps a bit! And…don’t be afraid to share your stories. I’ve found that although it makes you vulnerable, it also strengthens you.