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@carolinethewriter

Hey, I’m Gracie (one of several Grace’s on SE😆). I just read your story, and really liked it. Can’t wait for more!

One thing I noticed was that Max knew how to manipulate his sister…I know kids learn that naturally, but I wondered if you had a plan to make Jackie and Max learn to get along better by the end of the book. If you did, it might make Max into a fuller character.

Remember, don’t ever over-stress about your first draft. It’s just a draft, you can change it. Don’t worry about being perfect the first time through.

Keep up the good work.