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This is a hard question. I’m not really sure, but my suggestions are to make yourself feel sorry for her by showing the low she has reached and then having the joy of, in a sense, saving her. And to make her have some good qualities that you admire. For example, she can be a total wreck, but be courageous or headstrong in a good way (like, she isn’t pushed around much).

I have a MC that is similar in some ways. He’s got a lot of hate, and anger, and he’s pretty corrupted (thats just hard to say, because in my story it doesn’t come out so black as all that), but he’s also fearless, and observant, and hurting. Sometimes I wonder how I can possibly redeem him by the end of the story (I’m not sure I can do it), but I admire his good qualities and work on getting him past the awful ones.

I don’t know if that helped at all, or if I was just super confusing.😄