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  • Snack Thief replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago

    @w-o-holmes

    ‘Tis true, my friend, your poem has lasted long,

    But, seemed it, made of angels’ song.

    Soft and smooth, ’tis ever flowing,

    Meticulously writ, softly glowing.

    And though we stray from starting purpose,

    Mayhap it’s for the better chorus.

    Dauntless, we, with swords of ink; our pens,

    Delve into a world of poems; wishing no end.

     

    I really need to watch it at some point… I’m missing out and I don’t like it XD

    XD Yes, Will, you coined it, it’s your word, and nobody’s gonna take it away from you 😀 😀 (No, I’ve never seen it, but my friend has, and I think I remember him telling me something about a porcupine.)

    *nods* Very nice! Here’s one:

    Pit-patter-splash! rain falls on the leaves.

    Splash-patter-pit! raindrops hit the trees.

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