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Daeus Lamb started the topic Feedback on article on developing magic and tech in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 4 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys,
I’m developing an article for Story Embers on Developing magic and tech that transforms stories.
I’ve mostly completed the article, though it need some small additions (like a conclusion, lol.)
But I have this nagging feeling I’m missing something. Anyone want to peek at it and offer feedback on how I could make it better?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jTkW5jffD1B0vFtaZTyuS-TeuzHYY0yhQrxD_6wO5CU/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks!












