Hi guys,
I’m developing an article for Story Embers onΒ Developing magic and tech that transforms stories.
I’ve mostly completed the article, though it need some small additions (like a conclusion, lol.)
But I have this nagging feeling I’m missing something. Anyone want to peek at it and offer feedback on how I could make it better?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jTkW5jffD1B0vFtaZTyuS-TeuzHYY0yhQrxD_6wO5CU/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks!
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