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    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    Hi guys,

    I’m developing an article for Story Embers onΒ Developing magic and tech that transforms stories.

    I’ve mostly completed the article, though it need some small additions (like a conclusion, lol.)

    But I have this nagging feeling I’m missing something. Anyone want to peek at it and offer feedback on how I could make it better?

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jTkW5jffD1B0vFtaZTyuS-TeuzHYY0yhQrxD_6wO5CU/edit?usp=sharing

    Thanks!

     

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