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@crazywriter This is beautiful! The cadence is really good. Sometimes rhymed poems sound really forced and choppy, but this reads very naturally with a good rhythm that isn’t distracting. The only critique I would have is the last line, but I’d be being nitpicky.  The sentence structure is switched around to fit the rhyme, so it sounds a teeny bit awkward, but the meaning can still be understood. Overall, great job!

P.S. it sounds like it could be a song or something, just curious do you ever set your poems to music?