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Hmm, they’re both sarcastic idiots. There! Summarized the entire book! XD

Ah okay I see now why they wouldn’t work together. You can’t have two sarcastic people in a relationship, it would not work, so keeping them as friends is a wise decision 🙂 ah yes I remember Liorah! Aydin sounds really cool, I look forward to maybe at some point later reading content with these two in it. I’d be very interested in their character dynamics 🙂

Ooh, that’s cool! I actually like it when one of the two falls in love earlier. It makes for some interesting conflict.

Yeah I just love me some angsty conflict lol XD especially when the guy has to hide his feeling for her. I’m getting excited just thinking about it haha

It definitely is annoying! I mean, on one hand, there’s ‘They have big issues and past trauma that led up to this, and they have a crooked worldview that leads to their actions, but what they’re doing is very wrong. Even though I understand why it doesn’t excuse it.’ but too often it just turns into “Ya, okay, they were very evil, but look, they had motivation, so it’s cool, right? Right?” LOL

I know right, it’s so annoying! At least we have the sense to go against this ridiculous tide lol

Perfectionism can be a pain sometimes, and I totally get what you mean! All I can say is, you got this, you’ll work it out, and often plot holes are blessings in disguise   Once, I got stuck in a plot hole but it ended up leading to an entire subplot and a backstory for one of my characters. Weird when that happens XD You’ll definitely work it out!

Thanks, I hope I will! And it might lead to another sub plot, you’re right! The whole situation is that there’s a character who disguises himself as – we’ll call him a superhero for now. No one knows who he really is, they don’t know that he’s actually, lets just say, an enemy. And the reason he does this whole spiel is because he’s protecting someone and he doesn’t want them to know who he really is. My problem is that I don’t know which version of him should be put in which scene :/ should the superhero fella reveal the big secret to the protagonist or should it be the ‘baddie’? Who should be introduced first? Who is involved in the inciting incident? So yeah that’s my big issue haha.