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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago

    @joelle-stone

    *Stifled sobbing* Oh. My. Goodness, that was so amazing! It felt so real I was genuinely scared for her. Her thoughts felt so real and genuine, it was magnificent! You’re so amazing at emotional scenes, I just get dragged along by Riure’s narration, and her thoughts feel so real and make me love her even more. I was smiling so much when Sadiq was the first to greet her and she was laughing! That was so adorable!

    BTW, that post was amazing, especially this part: “I’d never thought about my last words to my sister, honestly, what sane person did? But I hadn’t expected them to be about boots, of all things. It was rather a letdown, but I could live with it. Or die with it, rather.”

    As an over-enthusiastic boot-adorer, that was AWESOME. A touch of humor in just the right spot.

    Thank you so much! I adore boots too XD And that was kind of Gavril’s sense of humor. I never notice his sense of humor before, but it’s kind of fun! He’s not as snarky as Liorah. (nobody is, she’s the queen of sass XD)

    @jasmine

    Those where so good! They had my totally engrossed and…*takes a giant ball of tissues from the quickly emptying box*. I almost felt as if we where about to kill of a bunch of characters even though I knew we wouldn’t.

    Thank you so much, Jasmine! Your post was awesome, I loved how Gwen was trying to stop the wall.

    @everyone

    So, who’s taking the next trap? Does anyone have any ideas? Can’t wait to see what y’all come up with!

     

     

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