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  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 4 months ago

    @wingiby-iggiby

    Kiark’s  fear was really interesting! The madness he was afraid of was super creepyinterestingcool. I like the way you combined his three greatest fears. I also liked the way he sang to comfort himself. I can relate to that, lol.

     

     

     

    @rose-colored-fancy

     

    Liorah: *Reading over my shoulder, as usual.* Oooh! I like this!*Grins evilly* Payback time. Me: nO. Nononono! We’re not doing that! *Closes Liorah’s document so she goes away* Whew. That was close.

    Yea, that pretty much sums it up.😅

     

    Gwendolyn awoke, trembling. Her breath came in a quick gasps and her eyes darted around the room until her mind finally came to the realization that she had been dreaming.

    She squeezed her eyes shut and forced herself to take a deep breath. But when she shut her eyes, two more icy blue eyes stared back at her from her dream. She quickly opened her eyes and controlled her breathing.

    It had been so vivid. She was shaving a hard time believing it had been a dream. She couldn’t stop thinking about those hurt, hopeful eyes. They haunted her mind like a ghost. A ghost  that wouldn’t stop shouting about her failure and fear.

    She blinked away the remains of sleep and rested her eyes on Liorah who was softly comforting the blind girl. Gwendolyn let the gentle words comfort her own mind and stoped shaking. She took another deep breath, pushed the dream from her mind as well as she could, and sat upright, wincing at the fiery twinge in her shoulder. She stretched her other arm and glanced at Rosario  who was now sleeping, then Ehud, who was now watching the passage.  she adjusted the sling, stood up and walked over to Ehud. She taped his shoulder, “I can take my shift now if you want to get some rest.” She whispered, trying to stay quiet.

     

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