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  • Erynne replied to the topic New book blurb – thoughts? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 5 months ago

    @daeus-lamb

    I really like both!! I do agree with pretty much everyone else that the second one is too vague. Perhaps if you took a few details from the first one and added it to the second? I love how the second one really makes you think. I myself would be more likely to read the book with the second blurb. (Not that the first one is bad, I just really love the mystery in the second ;))

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