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@ally-renee

Yeah, I really recommend “The False Prince”! It’s one of my favorite books.

I actually quite struggled to come up with which characters I wanted to become couples. I only have one pairing I’m really certain about, but they’re adorable (In my opinion XD)

I completely understand not writing as fast as you would like XD. I either struggle on 200 words for hours or write 2000 in a single sitting. LOL. I’m afraid the latter is fairly rare XD.

“Do you ever wonder what it’s like to live your life in hiding? Never feeling the sun on your skin, never venturing out of your front door, never interacting with other people because you live in fear? Or, at least, others around you live in fear. Yeah, that pretty much sums up my life right now.” – Penelope Lane

I LOVE that! That’s a really good first line and an excellent first paragraph! I love how it establishes Penny’s voice, her opinion of the situation, and the situation, both personal and around her.

I actually have to completely rewrite my first few chapters, since the pacing is much too slow and it’s actually quite dull XD.

Hmm, favorite line…. I’m pretty proud of the sarcasm in general, but there’s a particular conversation I like. (It isn’t really spoilers, since it’s already in the summary XD)

“We must fight the Kezbe. Every other option leads to definite destruction—” (I said,)
“Perfect! This one only has an eighty percent chance of destruction. I’m in, when do we start?” Acyn interrupted, still nettled.

What kind of scenes do you like to write, and which ones do you struggle with?