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  • Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago

    @backwardslivewriter

    Awesome post!  I already really like your characters 🙂
    And I’m so sorry about your great grandfather.  I also had a great grandparent die recently.

    And did anyone else get the “*Apparates away*” reference?  No, just me?

    @wingiby-iggiby

    Yes, football can be very intense 😛 I love it.  Especially sense my favorite team won the Super Bowl last year… *Cheers for Patrick Mahomes*

    Thank you!!! (About my post) Your’s was the same way! It was really fun to write, although kinda sad at the same time ’cause I know what happens in the second part of it, kinda like your’s with Ahab. (And yes, you did depress me for the whole day…. Poor Ahab.  But I get what you mean. I had to re-write Colma’s worst fear (the second part) ’cause it turned out too long and kinda dark and heavy.  But I was kinda bummed to cut that stuff out ’cause it really connected to her worst fear.  But, alas, it is what it is. ;P )

    But I really enjoyed your post (even though ’twas quite sad).  The way you wrote it conveyed everything with such feeling, I felt as if I really was Ahab, or in his head at least.  It was great (though ’twas heartbreaking)!  I really loved it (though ’twas bursting with sorrow)!  It was magnificent (though it sang with mournfulness)!  Sorry, no idea what that was.  I got wrapped up in saying how great it was while saying how it “twas so sad”.  😛

     

     

     

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