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Sarah Inkdragon replied to the topic Need Alpha Readers! in the forum Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
Alright @sageinthemeadow @devastate-lasting @morreafirebird @sarah-narnathron
Here’s the next part. This isn’t really even a whole chapter, but the rest of Chapter Two that I have finished writing and getting out of the rough form. Tell me what you think! And tag anyone else who might be interested in reading. 😉
I’m not entirely happy with this chapter, to be honest. It seems a bit… off. But I wanted a second opinion on it, so here you go.
The part is labeled: [NEW!] Part Two of Chapter 2












