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  • Beth replied to the topic What Is YOUR Story About? in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 11 months ago

    Alright here is the rest of my post!

    So the premise is, Jered (a 14-year-old boy) brother goes missing and he discovers that Tim (his brother) was transported into another world. So he has to go rescue him.  He meets other kids in the world and learns that they all have to work together in order to save Ninjanara (the world.) !!

    I don’t have any social media about it but yeah.

    Here is a part from my book.

    Jered’s eyes flew open. He jerked upright coughing up water. He was confused and looked around frantically. Where am I?

    His eyes landed on a figure a few feet in front of him, curled up in the sand. He reached for it and slowly turned it over. It was a boy, about Jered’s age, he was a little pudgy and seemed to be sleeping. Jered concentrated on the boy’s face, the boy looked so familiar that he could almost scream. Then it all came back, Tim disappearing, his dad’s letter, Aunt Evelyn, all of it.

    Silas!

    He crouched, and examined him carefully, he didn’t seem to have any wounds that he could tell. But he was out cold.

    He looked around searching for help. He was in a valley, surrounded by giant tree-studded ridges. A small pond like lake rippled in the center presumably fed by the streams running off the mountains.

    There wasn’t a person in sight.

    • Really cool!

    • @beth20
      Hi, I don’t really know what I’m supposed to be doing? Where do you suggest I start on here? I’ve been talking to a lot of really cool people, but, where do I go to read others’ writing, and post it myself? Sorry if it’s obvious. (:
      The movie Last Samurai? The violence isn’t a problem (usually), but the swearing likely will. I have the family that wouldn’t let me watch most Disney shows because the kids disrespected their parents (which I don’t mind). But I was allowed to watch Star Wars when I was five. (: Soooo,…I’ll ask.
      (: Gracie

      • Hey,
        So there are groups on here and you can join whichever group you write in. There you can talk to other (whatever genre group you joined) writers and post your content by clicking ‘create new topic’. Hope that made sense, tell me if it didn’t!
        Yeah, the language isn’t too bad, there are 11 ‘bad’ words total (don’t ask me why I counted, long story!) And they aren’t super bad ones. 🙂

      • Cool, thanks! I’ll try the castle now…So, basically, I have one of my characters appear in the castle, and explore a room?

      • Wow! My mom said ‘The Last Samurai’ is her favorite movie, sooo, the things you learn…

    • Yes, and if you want, they can interact with Jaylin (my character) or anyone else! Though everyone is together. Really??! That’s hilarious! XD

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