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@katja-r

Really nice! You’re making me jealous with the character arc and development that I think is coming…am I right? I’m still on the edge of my seat, wondering what’s going to happen. She couldn’t have been totally successful.😨😉

One thing I would suggest would be to emphasize her fear when Ranwick is talking to her. Ranwick never would have left her, but she left him, if you know what I mean.

Totally awesome. Keep it up.😊