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@edmund-lloyd-fletcher

Hi, just coming at this from a reader’s viewpoint.

I once read this series where the author used the same five paragraphs every time the main character appeared for the first time in a book. The series was nine books long and she never did this for any other character. It was really irritating and pushed me out of the book.

My point is. Please don’t be too lengthy, also, if you need to do this more than once, have variation.