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Warden replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@andrew, I’m a little confused, but I am assuming it is intentional.
I think maybe you should have mentioned the story about shadow reapers earlier to foreshadow this development a little. Nicholas being revealed as a shadow reaper would have been better done if the reader had already known what shadow reapers are. But otherwise, I like it!












