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@banana-peacock-warrior  Wow, powerful poetry!  I almost got chills reading it.   I enjoyed #2 and #5, #2 especially.

I think one thing you may want to consider changing is the prologue.  It’s a good thought, but the rhyming seems just a little… forced?  It takes a little away from the rest of the poems, which contain powerful images.  Maybe consider a “call to action” type line or focus in on a baby’s heartbeat — something that really grabs your attention and pulls you in.

Otherwise, awesome job on addressing this issue through poetry!  I think more people should realize the horrors of abortion and stand up against it.