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Ok so I’m not sure where the best place to put this would be so I’m just posting it here. This is a summary of one of my current WIPs, ‘The Adventures of Kiel Gomenoife.’ I hate writing book reviews, summaries, etc, so we shall see how bad this is and if I have patience enough to finish it lol. Just assume that if you’re reading this, I did finish it. Here it is:

Kiel Gomenoife, age 19, is an orphan living in North Gyvern, Tarzamolia. He, his friend Hazel, and some other acquaintances overthrow the tyrant leader and set up a new, better king, then set off in search of an ancient talisman. With the help of some leprechauns, they find a missing parent, as well as the talisman, and all is well until Kiel decides to build a time machine. It malfunctions, and now, with a twisted ankle, as well as some unexpected dinosaurs, Kiel must use his wits to escape the past.

Ok, so this feels very short and rushed, but at least it’s something. Any feedback on how to kinda slow down and lengthen it any?

Also, I know I’ve emailed this story to some of you for critique. I won’t be emailing it to anyone else, for a while, because I’m changing the plot just a bit, so be warned. The summary above is for the current plot as of 6/29/19. I’m not sure when I’ll get around to editing it, but just know that the summary might be changed slightly to fit the new plot at some point.

Thanks!

@april-j-rhys