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Ariella Newheart posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
@steward-of-the-pen Here’s the link to my book! I really appreciate your willingness to help me with conversations and show-don’t-tell. I should also warn you that I have a habit of accidentally leaving words out of sentences, so if you notice anything like that, by all means tell me. Thank you so much! 🙂
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lzSmMZq02D1qUEzI9vGK8YnZ8InSIs0RkbVCz58g0dA/edit?usp=sharing
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@ariella-newheart Glad I can help! I’ll be a little slow reading it for the next couple weeks, but then I’ll be done with school and can be more actively giving feedback. Also, I’ll probably read a little more before I start commenting on the things you asked for. That way, I’ll have a bigger picture and hopefully can give more helpful feedback.
I’m really excited to meet the character you named yourself after! 😀