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  • Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Ash Fall Writing Snippets(hopefully) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago

    @the-fledgling-artist

    Okay!

    So, I think I agree with you on the temper thing. I actually was wondering if I made her calm down too soon.

    Alright, I’ll keep that in mind! Eiri’s pretty close to Jaren, but not that close.

    Okay! Yeah, I was worried about that being info-dumpy. I’ll work on spacing that all out and just incorporating it naturally as they travel and stuff.

    And that’s the second time someone’s commented on all my italicizing. I guess I really do need to cut down on that. I’ll try to keep a better eye out for how much I’m doing that!

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