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@corissa Grammar edits are great, but not necessary if you’re busy. I mainly just wanted to make sure the representation of God didn’t seem heretical. 😉 (This is only the first draft.)

Sorry, yeah, Menthril is not really an exact Adam character. He’s more of an Adam/Lucifer mix, but not quite either of those. My story’s not a strict allegory. I modify some elements a little bit to make it a more original story. Exton is just a normal human. He will take on some symbolic nature, but that’s not for a long while.