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@daeus-lamb Wow. It’s very powerful. A couple of questions:

1: Do you want grammar edits? (I suggested one, and saw a couple others but wondered if the draft was too young to start in on the grammar yet. 😉 )

2: Your impression of God I think was fair, but Menthril… if he represents Adam, does he have a redemption arc? I must admit I find it a little strange that Adam would be a villain. In fact, your description very much fits Lucifer.

3: Does Exton represent someone, and if so, who?