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Hello!

I had a poem I wrote somewhat experimentally, and wanted to get some feedback on it. Feel free to give me feedback, or post your own experimental poems.

Here’s mine:

Snap

What one word has
the power to
feel broken in
tiny pieces. I
can’t decide how
to put the
words together. So
I keep trying to
solve the problem. An
endless stream of
fragments and
blunted hope, still
convoluted by
my tired brain. How
can I solve this
mystery? It
goes on and on, not
waiting for me to
catch my breath. I
don’t know where to
start, and I
don’t know when it
ends. I just
know that it will
have to end at
some point. That will be
the moment my
heart will finally
snap.