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Mairin Atha started the topic Short Story in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
Hi again, MEERKATs! 🙂
I’ve written a short story for a contest, and it’s due Thursday, so I’d love to have some more eyes on it! I just started writing it on Friday, so it might still be a little rough, but that’s why I need feedback. 😉 I’d love any kind of feedback (no kidding, tear it apart ), but specifically:
1. does it make sense? Do you… get it?
2. It… doesn’t match the story prompt exactly. Do you think that’s ok?
3. Is it too weird?Title: You’ve Already Killed Him, But You Have to Know (Other title ideas are welcome… this one’s a bit long, but it gives a clue to what the story really means)
Content Tags: None! (I know the title makes it sound like someone’s killed, but they’re not. XD)
Word Count:Â 1645
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gNNllpnmikjv3TzTfuHP9AKdCKar6vbr9IhSSmnfCio/edit?usp=sharing
Tagging friends who’ve enjoyed my short stories in the past (don’t feel like you have to do this… I know how it is to be crunched for time XD)
Thank you all so much! 😀 <3












