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  • Mairin Atha started the topic Short Story in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago

    Hi again, MEERKATs! 🙂

    I’ve written a short story for a contest, and it’s due Thursday, so I’d love to have some more eyes on it!  I just started writing it on Friday, so it might still be a little rough, but that’s why I need feedback. 😉 I’d love any kind of feedback (no kidding, tear it apart  ), but specifically:

    1. does it make sense? Do you… get it?
    2. It… doesn’t match the story prompt exactly. Do you think that’s ok?
    3. Is it too weird?

    Title: You’ve Already Killed Him, But You Have to Know (Other title ideas are welcome… this one’s a bit long, but it gives a clue to what the story really means)

    Content Tags: None! (I know the title makes it sound like someone’s killed, but they’re not. XD)

    Word Count: 1645

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gNNllpnmikjv3TzTfuHP9AKdCKar6vbr9IhSSmnfCio/edit?usp=sharing

    Tagging friends who’ve enjoyed my short stories in the past (don’t feel like you have to do this… I know how it is to be crunched for time XD)

    @jane-maree

    @parker

    @nicoleg

    @fctait

    @selah-chelyah

    @scarletimmortalized

    Thank you all so much! 😀 <3

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