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  • valtmy replied to the topic Betas Wanted: QOD in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago

    @seekjustice

    Sorry for distracting 😛 Please continue your good work with SFI!

    Glad to know that you loved this part (Drat you, inner critic! Why did you trouble me so?). Feel free to add in comments if you have any. I would like to know if there is anything I can improve on. 😀

    I like Taekyeon having more page time too because it seems that the scenes which do not involve him are the angsty ones (My opinion on angsty stories should be fairly obvious by now). As for Jang… He has already been dealt with a really bad hand so I felt sorry too. But it was necessary. There is a reason why I kept insisting that this is not a romance novel after all. 😛

    By the way, now that you have finished Part 3, I think you have a fair idea of where this story is going. There is a plot point for Part 4 that I wish to seek your input on. Explaining it is going to be lengthy so do you mind if I drop you an email about this?

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