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anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic I know it's awful XD But can I get some critique anyways? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Lol! Thanks! Yes, this is all I have written so far. I haven’t touched it since I first wrote it, except right before I posted it here when I fixed some basic grammatical errors so grammar police like me wouldn’t have a heart attack XD
Just so you know, we’ve been asked not to use the whole-guild tagging lists; it’s against the forum guidelines. OHH I’M SO SORRY!! I knew I’d probably be doing something wrong, lol. Thanks! I’ll make a smaller list of maybe like four people for the future.
@ariella-newheart Thanks! At the time I wrote it I was obsessed with weird names like those… Yes, Bart is the only guy. Which I am gonna change. XD And if I end up continuing this book, the bullies are gonna pop back up I think.












