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@warrenluther04 Ok, I wasn’t sure which part of that you wanted me to elaborate on. For the first part, I think others have said all that needs to be said. For the second part, I just meant that you shouldn’t end on “We think you can make it.” Let the pilot say “Roger that” or whatever and then show the very beginning of whatever caused the plane to disappear. Not all of it, just enough to make the reader gulp and say to themselves “Oh no, I bet they didn’t make it.”