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  • WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Alpha-Readers for a Cowritten Sci-Fi Novel in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago

    @allison-grace Yep, you can! 🙂 And I would like whatever is easiest for you to accomplish. Oh, and it’s OK if you one-time alpha. I understand that we’re all busy. 🙂 Thanks!

    @sarah-inkdragon Thanks! That’s ok. I have school that ends at 2:30 plus homework so I’m usually not on much during the schoolweek as well. Oh, okay. XD. I’m not WarrenLuther04 on my doc as well. (Although my profile pic is still my dog.)

    @sarah-narnathron Here you go:

    The only reason they wouldn’t have a field day over it is if the government moved fast to hush up what happened— in which case no one would report the disappearance at all; they’d say that the plane crashed or something like that.

    Regarding the prologue: as others have said, it’s pretty short and doesn’t really grab my attention. Show-don’t-tell will help, but you might also consider extending it a little further. Give us a few more hints as to why we care about this plane and what might be coming.

    Thanks all for reading! 🙂

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