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  • EricaWordsmith replied to the topic Do Teen Guys Cry? (help me out please) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago

    @the-inkspiller

    Good, because I’m only giving slow access to one person right now. 😉

    It is hard, and the more my friend edits for me, the more I realize that he is a hard character to get just right.

    Well, sort of right sort of not. He doesn’t feel like a burden, he feels like he’s being crushed under the burden of what he’s doing. That/grief and terror in the beginning is what makes him such a hard person, but as he grows through the book, he is changed by the end, and that’s when tears come.

    BTW, your character sounds like a lot of fun. 😉 I love secondary characters, they’re just so much fun to explore and develop.

    That’s what my friend told me. Put cracks in his character that help to show that there is a heart behind the mask, but technically, he’s lost at the beginning and finds himself again in the end. Which is sort of odd because things are not perfect, he just has hope he didn’t have before.

    That’s great, I hope that it goes well for you. 🙂 I’m not familiar with RPG, but great job with publishing. It was really neat, I actually got to see the lady who heads up the organization I was going to go with last night, that was such a blessing to run into her.

    PCC, I absolutely love the campus, music program, everything.

    I don’t really know either of those types of music. XD I’m a soundtrack girl, but I also love a lot of folk-style music and right now I’m in love with The Piano Guys… Mainly because I’m starting cello soon.

    You make chainmail??? That’s awesome!!!!! Seriously, that is super cool. I do not have time for video games… XD Writing and everything else/retaking the SAT, all of it is just… I barely even get reading time nowadays.

    Hmm, don’t know either of those either. If you want to play something that’s going to get me going, play A Sky Full of Stars by TPG, I am in love with it right now. I’d love to play that or All of Me (by Jon Schmidt) on the piano.

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