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  • K. A. Grey replied to the topic Fresh Poems! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

    @kb-writer  Wow.  Your poem is awesome.  At first I thought I liked the third stanza the best, but as I kept reading it kept getting better.  “He hears fathoms of thoughts with each tear.”  That is such a beautiful thought.

    Yeah, my poem really doesn’t fit together that well.  And playing with words actually was the whole point at first… 😂  The rest kind of came after, when I added “Where there’s a way, there’s a will.”   It probably should be two different poems.

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