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K. A. Grey replied to the topic Fresh Poems! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@kb-writer Wow. Your poem is awesome. At first I thought I liked the third stanza the best, but as I kept reading it kept getting better. “He hears fathoms of thoughts with each tear.” That is such a beautiful thought.
Yeah, my poem really doesn’t fit together that well. And playing with words actually was the whole point at first… 😂 The rest kind of came after, when I added “Where there’s a way, there’s a will.” It probably should be two different poems.












