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Rachel replied to the topic Critique for Rachel 🙂 in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi guys, so I could use some help gauging how readable my first chapter is. 🙂 @kate @r-j-karas did you have a chance to read my first chapter yet? And you can tell me if it needed a lot of work, that’s why I asked people to read it. It’s just at the stage where I have read it so many times I need a fresh set of eyes. 🙂
And @eden-anderson you’re invited to the party as well! 🙂
As always grateful for any helpful comments guys! Thank you!












