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lydia-writes replied to the topic Post Poems Here —> in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
my heart goes out to you
despite all that you’ve done
because I know what it’s like
being/to be in a dark room
with no light
and I can understand
why you think
that tearing down the walls
of people’s vibrant rooms
will/can let the light into yoursAny critique would be welcome 🙂 And I was wondering what words separated by a / work better












