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  • R.J. Karas replied to the topic Karas Critiques in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago

    @eden-anderson – Ohhh, cool! Thanks. I will definitely take another look at the man-to-merman transition. Originally, I was aiming for 700 words (and went over, as usual). Now that I can go up to 1000, I have lots of options. Thanks for pointing me in a good direction for how to use those words! Don’t sell yourself short. The newest writer has been a reader for years. The feedback was super helpful! Thanks 🙂
    Also, thanks so much for reading my other stuff! I tried to keep it tight with Biblical culture and also avoid adding anything to the Biblical narrative. I agree with you about Biblical fiction. This is more like “Biblical Backstory” if that’s a thing. Guess it is now 😉 If I post my other ones, I’ll be sure to tag you so you can read it if you like.

    @msqueen8 – “Unexpected” Cha-ching! *Fist pump* 😀 Thanks so much for reading it!

    @noahlitle – Oh, no no, thank YOU! Good to know. I’l definitely flesh that out some more. (Also, it seems that even when you’re tired, you can be punny 😉 *Gold star*)

    @chalice – Aww, thanks so much for reading! Thanks for mentioning that. With another 200 words to work with, I’ll flesh that out for sure. Yay culture expansion!! 😀 And thanks for the catch on that line. Edits get me every time 😉 I fixed it.

     

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