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Bravo! Both were well-written lots of fun 🙂

Grace, I also must applaud your ending–tying in the boy’s search with it too–bravo!

Kate, I think your prose and word-choices add to the humor, and Jason is hilarious, for sure.

*Deep breath* I vote for Kate. (Man, I need to write another rough draft. It’s a bit easier than voting! 😉 )

If we go with Kate’s, could I recommend a change in the ending? I really liked how Grace had Lisa paint eyebrows on at the end. It felt–victorious. Could something similar be done to end Kate’s? Thoughts? Could Jason lend Lisa the paint or something, and in exchange she agrees to let him sketch her? Just ideas.