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@allison-grace alrighty — I’ll keep that in mind 😉

@sarah-inkdragon two votes for character development then.

For your piece — I like it! You did a great job including action and dialogue to show the conflict, rather than just having his thoughts bounce back and forth.

@sarah-narnathron I’m thinking of starting on a new one sometime in October. Looking at the feedback here, it will likely be either on character development or worldbuilding.

@filewriter the poor sarcastic characters always get tortured so much XD I liked your piece! My one thought is to keep his Ghost a bit more…mysterious. The fight scene happens pretty fast, so I don’t think Daniel would have time to slow down and consciously think all these thoughts. Just having something flash through his mind — his mother’s face, his father’s anger — could convey the Ghost more powerfully than spelling it out. 🙂

@devastate-lasting I think worldbuilding and character development are tied. I’ll think about both of them 😉