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@cassie-hartfinh @j-a-penrose @steward-of-the-pen @writercatherine

First off, thank you Cassie!  I enjoyed it.  Great job.

As for my thoughts: I do agree about the ending seeming just a little bit on the abrupt side.  I’ll try and think of a suggestion how to make it a bit better…(note-important word: “try”).

I think that we need just a little something more unique in the prose though, like you said, Cassie.  But until then, some more editing will definitely improve that.