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@e-b-raulands and @anne-of-lothlorien Thank you for your feedback.  E.B. Raulands, those last lines are something I have been a bit troubled about as well.  I think what I meant was that everyone tries to find hope in life, but rarely finds it.  But then…those other lines.  Do you have any suggestions that could help it to improve?

How does this sound?

Though all of mankind seeks it out,
In worldly things ’tis rarely found;
Yet there is one with power to grant
This wondrous gift with joy unbound.

Thank you all so much!