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@Noahlitle CRIPES! Cuttin’ it kinda close, don’t you think? :’D

Like I’m one to talk. XD

I really like your edits though. Especially towards the end, as mine felt a little rushed. (I wonder why… not like I was trying to cram an ending in as few words as possible… hm…) I did tweak a few things; wording and such, and cut a few lines that repeated an already established emotion, but for the most part I think it’s ready to go.

Julian was on the roof randomly because that’s where Em told him she’d meet him that night. Boris was probably just coming to check and make sure none of his own sweeps were hanging around when the building was gonna blow, because that would cost him valuable business capital. But since it was ‘the lunytic’ he didn’t really care.

If possible, I’d like to get this submitted by this evening because I have instructions on how to do it in our guildmaster’s absence, but I’m going to be gone most of the day Saturday.

If you ladies and gents want to get in any last suggestions or questions, now would be a good time. @Cassandraia @Samuel @Literatureforthelight @Julianne