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@faith_blum Argh man, physical descriptions + not sounding forced is pretty much the wooooorst. xD About 80% of the time, I just ignore the physical descriptions all together (which is also a terrible option). >.<

@fctait Ah yep yep, descriptions is another good thing to work on.

@parker Hmm well, I COULD potentially do something about editing, because that is important too. *strokes chin thoughtfully*

@professorsjb Long sentences–cool. What sort of long sentences do you struggle with most? Are they simply long, descriptive sentences, or are they run-on sentences, or something else?