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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Not a mix often seen.It should be seen more often imo 🙁
It’s nice 🙂I’m glad you like it! At first, I wasn’t quite sure how people would receive it, but so far people really like him and that makes me happy 🙂
I have no idea what you’re talking about, but this sounds awesomely hilarious XDOh boy…how do I start…
So, Spire used to be WAY more dystopian, and focused on Basil and a female super soldier as main characters (as of now, she’s no longer in the story.) This was way back before Kit and Val existed, and it was pretty much an entirely different story in many ways. Basically, Sasha was the “main” supersoldier project, but a failed experiment ended up turning him into an alternate reality (yes you read that correctly XD) and he gained reality bending/warping powers. He also gained the ability to create “rifts” in the Veil (basically, the fabric of reality, and the source of his powers.) He ended up going rogue and decided to try and erase Spire from existence to undo all of the damage and suffering done there.
Quinn was one of Emily’s characters, and he was just such a sweet poor boi 🙁 He lost his foot in a wagon accident (which also killed his mom,) and he was the go to whenever we needed a pitiful scene because he was just so smol and sad and helpless 🙁
So, at first Sasha was a rather sympathetic villain, but then he decided to just be insufferable and obnoxious (and so I eventually just cut him from the story.) He ended up in the character castle, decided to flirt with @rose-colored-fancy‘s character Liorah to make another girl jealous, and HURLED Quinn out of the way to go talk to her (and he has super soldier strength too…) and then misinterpreted Liorah’s horrified gaze as *interest*, and then Liorah beat him up and he still didn’t get the hint XD
My other character caught Quinn though, so he was fine XD
https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/character-castle-2-0/page/120/
This page had the entry in question on it XD










