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@sarah-vdh Awesome snippet!

Okay, in general, I’d say that was fine and needed no improvement really. (Only little things) But due to this particular lesson, I don’t think we got quiiiiite enough emphasis on the object. We need his thoughts straying back to it. We need some more emotion attached. See if you can just bring up the object a little bit more. *nodnod*

But good job!