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  • Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago

    *sheepishly walks into room, quietly closes the door, pads over to the chair around the circular table, gets folders and notes in order, looks up at the others, smiles, and says:*

    “Ahem. I have been gone for a while. Very sorry about that. My phone has apparently not been getting all the emails it was supposed to, and I have been a bit busy. Now, I have missed two pages of detail work, but here I am. Shall we start?”

     

    Name wise for these Jedi Police Guys, I like Crystalbolt Hunters, but The Elite Unit sounds cool. Maybe The EU for short?

    Isn’t Andor one of the High Judges? And then maybe Aleena and Maxwort are the others? (BTW, Maxwort is awesome. Maybe the contestants prefer Andor over Aleena and Maxwort since Aleena and Maxwort are strict, no-nonsense people, and Andor might be more friendly.)

    Yes! Andor is more friendly, and that can play a big role in getting him the support he needs. Also, Maxwort is a perfect name and I love the image of this grouchy no-nonsense fellow walking around, strait backed, with a silver cane tucked under his arm.

    What’s Andor’s plan? Wasn’t he going to influence one of the contestants to use him/her for his own ends? Or something?

    So, I think Andor’s plan was to use the Cullings to sift out eight people to use as his “special” force, which would then command the Jedi Police and start a galaxy wide purge of all criminals and those Andor deems a threat to society. Also, he might be thinking of getting into their good graces so when they complete their apprenticeships, they’ll be more likely to bend to his will. If y’all have any better ideas, please say so!

    And we really need to develop what happens to losing contestants.

    We were thinking about doing this slavery thing, right? Now, that sounds really cool, but Andor was trying to abolish all evil. So maybe there’s this other guy/gal who is working behind his back doing bad stuff…. Hmm… eeek! I’ve just got an idea! What if, at the conclusion or our tale, Andor helps our team to defeat the undercover organisation who is trying to rescue criminals and revolt against Andor’s rule? I have a feeling I just made things a whole lot more complicated…

    Also, I think we should all pick a branch we want our person to win.

    Oh man. More thinking, LOL

    And the ideas for the branches/games/terrain stuff sounds great! So for the technology Mechanical Battle, it could be testing your knowledge of technology because you have to power down the robot beast! This could have been you idea all along, and I am just slow, LOL And for the Labyrinth, you have to use anything you can remember for anything…. I am impressed with how you put all that together!

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