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@taylorclogston

Thank you for the feedback! It was extremely helpful, and I admit I laughed a couple of times at the way you phrased some of the flaws. I was not ever trying to be corny, but now I certainly see it. The alternate ending with Olivia sounds appealing, but it also sounds a bit convenient, not to mention a tad outside her character to own a firearm.
As to the origin of the monster, I was trying to write it so that the reader could make of it as they wanted, but leave it a mystery.