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I love it, very good, *has fake coughing fit to hide tears*

Broken

When I had somebody to love me, 

Everything was less hard, 

Every hour we spent together,

Has now broken my heart,

When I was lonely,

No one helped to comfort me,

Every minute we spent together,

Has broken my heart inside me,

Now when I’m lonely,

I cry in silence all alone,

And when I need somebody,

I am vastly broken.

No one has tried to help me,

Defeat this dark shadow of pain,

I cry in silence, and pine for love,

I am quite afraid.

What if no one wants me?

Because I’m so fallen?

Yet, in the distance,

I hear someone calling.

Saying; I will love you,

Forever, as you are,

My love will find you,

No matter where you are.

I shall always love you,

And treasure you forever,

And by your side, I shall remain 

And leave you I shall never.

I lifted my head up,

And wiped away my tears,

Grasped the offered hand,

And the pain disappeared.

My grief fell away,

And new joy was born,

And I was victorious,

No matter how worn.

I smiled, and followed the voice,

Into a new light,

And to a beautiful city we went,

A city new and bright.

Gold and silver, and opals shined,

The voice spoke again,

This is where you’ll live,

And my love shall never end.

Quite messy still, I wrote this this morning on impulse, just wanted critique on it. 🙂